blur the BG with a gausian of 1 and then erase with a lowered opacity eracer. and erase completely off the focal. add much more focal. colors arent really your friend here. prolly the stock though. ive tried it too xP. just needs more FG and BG effects. has some potential though. keep working on it.
1st one does,nt seems to equaly lvled on render.. 2nd one is better worked i liked the blurness Ă Ҝ Ą Ŧ Ş Ų Қ ł -
I like it and I think it works good but on the left side where you have that red strip of background I don't like the fine line that seperates it, or maybe I just dont like the red strip lol but thats just me overall good sig
That looks a lot better than your first I personally still dont like the red on the left lol but it still looks good