Be Cool

Im not finished with this one so if you gusy can give me some tips on what to adds and what kind of text i should put on would be really helpful thx



v2

v3

 

I would say have something more happening in that just blank space of red in the top left corner. Other than that, I like it.

 

Ye i dunno what to add thanks for comment

 

new version

 

i like it
it has flow
and a focal point.
i think you should add a few touch ups, coloring, depth maybe, whatever you feel is needed.
and find a better way to incorporate text.
other then that
spectacular

 

v4 lol

 

hmm i like it other than the fact that it looks like someone is stealing his glasses. it doesnt look like his hand. lol.

 

lol k thx

 

I think it looks good would be better if you could see more of his arm like hells said

but other than that I like it. v4 is the best that you have posted though