The Butterfly Effect

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  1. Geko-Slave

    Geko-Slave Senior Member

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    Pretty cool, but it doesn't look like he's pulling anything back tbh..And I don't really like the blue coloring.
     
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    Too bright really, kills the focal point. Depth is a bit funny too, sharp on left, then blurs to the right, then sharpens up. Lighting also doesn't make sense in parts. Some bits I love, some are eh, not your best Skyline.
     
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    the colors seem a bit off

    try using a gradient map
     
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    Some parts look really nice, but theres others that dont seem right, its a good idea and you almost pulled it off gj
     
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    his hand looks like hes not grabbing something, its the depth, its weird. not bad, kinda kennedyish.
     
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    it looks like hes pushing his way out of a building collapse. i think his hand should be a tad bit sharper becasue it is more in the foreground.
     
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    both his hands do need to be sharper. it'd increase the focal a bit. it just needs...more. its c4d+render=done. Try some default techniques.
     
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    maybe darken the bg a bit, i really like think this one could be awesome if you work on it a bit more
     

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