I made the graphic specifically for the poem I created but Criticism, Rating, or helpful hints wanted
"Post your large pieces, wallpapers,etc" So i figured they had to be like 800x600 +?? this one is 700 x 525... if it's in the wrong place sorry and move it then? C&C appreciated..
Wrong place, referring specifically to the 'Large Piece' section, basically anything that doesn't fit in your sig. It's a bit, weird, seen a lot, a lot, A LOT of graphics that look practically identical to this one. It's relatively, weird. I mean, the poem makes no sense at all but graphically. Maybe...something, not so...ehm...emo.
will remember about the large pieces next time i post but this one did say "A place to show off all your artwork and to get it rated." all of your artwork lol as for "not so emo" could you define that better? it makes no sense to me.... the image is supposed to be emo styled.. its like me telling a c4d creator to not make it so c4d?
I mean it's so cliche of 'Emo' it's barely emo. If you're doing something emotional it doesn't have to be the most depressing, grey, bloody and cliche on the planet. It's OTT. LESS IS MORE! And so forth.
The whole right side of the poem makes absolutely no sense....this is yet again in the wrong section. He is pushing her away....yet he is the one who is complaining that they are splitting? I've never heard of that..
Would it have killed you to make some form of comment on the actual graphics at the same time? Yes, it's the wrong section, but it's unlikely it'll be moved so deal with it, and now he knows.
Sorry, the render is blended in too much. You can see right through him. And as Broken said, there is too much grey. ^^
I revoke any slightly positive comment I may have posted in this topic. Thanks for the PM. Nab. PS : OP not Karter.