looks ok i guess. the clipping could be used better, show the bg rather than the bg. nice effects. could use some more flow.
Your God of War sig is great... the man of steal...? well... not your best one Something is off... good technique but i think its just plain the wrong render for the job... maybe a little more smudging on the background... i really don't know what it is all in all - i say it's an ok from me.