Star Wars Sig

my first sig i done for 2 years.. what you think ?

 

the laser on the left takes away all the flow :/
Was it in the original render?

Also, even though I tend to like sharpy tags, this one is too much for me :/

 

i think you need to lose the text and the border, they are clashing wiht this piece. and i would keep working with it and establish some depth. but it looks good.

 

I agree with hells. Yeah, the lightsaber is pretty distracting mabye darken it with the Burn tool so it's not so bright.

 

ok cheers guys ill try and play around with it later