for a second i couldnt find the render. i looked for like 3 secs and then i saw it. so deff work on bringing out the focal in this sig. background is to distracting. and the text i didnt even notice till now.
With your render being THAT big you really need to have it way more sharper Also, what text? :/ Not sure how many percent is render, how many BG... as far as I can see maybe 150 sq pixels BG? How are you supposed to get depth with that? Looks great but I'd either go for a tag with more depth or play with it untill you get to an abstract background. Like this it's just weird