I like the effects, but they seem a little over sharpened to me either that or its my monitor Mabye blend in the render a little more, and use smaller text just for that particular tag. Left side also looks a little empty, apart from all that though, it's pretty good ^_^ Gj.
Render's way too small, the effects are nice but they have no flow and the blending needs work too. Try some tutorials, keep going though