Sorry I dont really like. Id read some tutorials and learn how to use c4d properly and smudge in a manor that is appealing. Not much depth too might i add. Keep it up though ^_^
Lol Jimmy. Yeah, V2 looks pretty messy and too shiny. Add some depth, smudge the render for some nice effects and don't be afraid to take risks. If you make a mistake you'll learn from it. Probably most of us could only draw stick figures before, lol ^_^ Remember practice makes perfect. Keep it up ^^
agree with all of the above. and you need to start picking better renders with more quality. i think i have told you this before. keep it up though man. you will eventually get the hang of it and get a lot better.