Batman Again Lol

I didnt like how the other one came out so i tried again, i think its better, i suck at text. also been experimenting with soem new techniques so ye C % C plz







better? if i do it any more it looks weird

 

It's alright. Better than the other one.
The lighting is a bit too strong.

 

k ill work on lighting thx

 

stop doing that with your lighting.
it doesnt look good.

 

got any tips on how to make it better?

 

dont place half the brush on the canvas, and lower the opacity
read up some tutorials, that have a good light source on the tag, and youll figure out a correct placement

 

k thanks man

 

I don't like the style. Sorry.