Dmc

I asked about 10 people before, and keep getting bad comment. When I ask what's wrong with it, they won't reply
Can some people give me a decent c&c? ty

 

It lacks lighting and depth.

 

looks ok, just abit messy. also need work on text.

 

nice bg association.. love it mostly..
juz some parts seems alittle oversharpened

 

I'll try to make it less sharper, but where should I add the lighting? and how do I add depth, because I always seem to have trouble with it.