Realism - Spiderman

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Jesse K, Sep 9, 2008.

  1. Sep 9, 2008 at 9:25 PM #1
    Jesse K

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  2. Sep 9, 2008 at 9:31 PM #2
    Greasy Pete

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    the background rain doesn't fit in with the rain that was on the stock that great
     
  3. Sep 9, 2008 at 9:31 PM #3
    Jesse K

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    yeah, it was hard trying to find some rain textures and all.
     
  4. Sep 9, 2008 at 10:29 PM #4
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    ^^ i agree with you.
     
  5. Sep 10, 2008 at 1:40 AM #5
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    Dim the background to fit in with the raining environment.
     
  6. Sep 10, 2008 at 4:08 PM #6
    Jesse K

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    Allright, anymore CnC?
     
  7. Sep 10, 2008 at 4:26 PM #7
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    try and blend the render alittle bit more.
     
  8. Sep 10, 2008 at 4:27 PM #8
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    Render needs to be more outstanding, i like the bg stock tho
     
  9. Sep 10, 2008 at 6:04 PM #9
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    A couple things I don't like. There is too much rain going on, and some in different directions. The first thing I noticed is how sharp the back of spiderman is. I think it could use a bit more photo philters and gradient maps to make the background colors a little better. The render looks like it is sort of floating. You should have put him on or next to another building (to get the "I'm sticking to the wall" effect).

    I just noticed the tree :P. That doesn't belong there either. By the looks of the background he looks very high up, and I doubt there is a Redwood in the middle of downtown New York.
     

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