New Halo Sig

I think I've improved from a while back.. Started using more effects and stuff.. Tell me what you think about this one, I made it for someone on another forum

 

hhhmm... ok i guess..... colors are a bit odd i think. and there is little/no flow
text effect removes all depth sort of...cuz there wasn't much to begin with -- try adding more depth
sry for all the flaming .... >_< lol

 

Exactly what he ^^^ said.

 

try adding depth by playing with the dodge and burn tool, also try to create an vocal that catches the attention of the users because now it's to hectic and my eyes can't find where to look.

 

Hmm render is rly populair but i think it's a lil lame still using it. The background looks cool but the halo figure doesn't fit in imo