Manga Style

i just bought beck's tut and... well this is my first serious sprite tag.... i would like some CnC plz... i know its kinda bad in some parts but im tryin to improve ! thxthx !

 

:bump:

 

Kinda strange. I can't see what is is or what it's supposed to be. i also dislike the right part...

 

the tut is in the paid tut's section called Zuma tag....
my outcome was crappy compared to what the tut was.....
its supposed to be kinda comic-book / manga ish.....

 

meh looks kinda decent.
Also can i have the link to the tut?

 

its a paid tut.. you need to buy it

 

My bad i already did.

 

I keep seeing this same sig with 3 sections. I don't like the style so it's hard to rate.