I like it, just need to do some blurring (not much) and work on the contrast. Also a 3 pixel black border on top and bottom would be nice =)
I think the main flaw is the focal, it's very low quality and hard to actually make out. Be more picky with your choice of renders/stocks cause they can either make or break a tag a lot of times. As well as text which you should either improve or remove.