Artificial Genetics

Just may be one of my best..

This is also an entry for a Sotw on another site, the theme is Sci-fi

 

meh it's decent.

 

You do realize that CnC like that does nothing? If it's so "decent" then tell me what to do to make it better.

 

haha your right let me break it down for you.
Needs a better background, and it looks like you just pasted the focal and a peice of that villan from Spider man.
Also those two focal pecies don't blend together the arm and the black girl i mean.
Add more effects throw in some more c4d's, etc.
Imo you need to think awhile and redo it.

 

text is bad, some of it looks lq, colouring and compo need alotta work imo.

 

Okay thanks..

That's the only concept I have so far so I'll just have to try making them blend a little better or something