looks allright, too dark around his face and like you said the text doesn't look or blend in well, and the focals a bit too over sharpened. Nice smudging.
It's a nice looking tag. But the awkward borders don't work here. You also blurred his arm a bit too much. Lessen the effect so it creates a more realistic Depth of Field. Text is nice. But maybe have it going the other way so it flows better with the effects and render.
