Smudge

V1


V2


What do you guys think?

 

you should work on ur depth m8 colors are nice though.

p.s. is your name brett?! i saw the link name when i went to look at it on a white background, cuz if so thats crazy coincidental lol

 

LOL ya my name is Brett. My photobucket name is Brett6 so that might be why. Smudging isn't really what I like to do, I was just doing it to be in the sotw

 

Could definitely use some depth. There's not really a focal point.

 

My attempt for more depth. I know your not allowed to add any objects for the SoTW so I just added some brushing. Maybe a little too much.

V2

 

Still needs a bit more depth but v2 is better

 

feeling v2 more and the sharpness adds a better feel to it.