yeh i any tips on how to do better text cuz ive never been good with it. and yeh i dont like it either i might change it
Yes, the sparks are way out of place here, (apart from the fact them being too sharp) Indeed, the text could use some work Apart from that it's decent really I'd just say take away the bright spot where lighting messes op his ear
Here's something that may help. Try Applying the image (Ctrl + shift + alt + E), then duplicating that applied image (CTRL + J). On the top copy add a Gaussian Blur of about 1.5 - 3 pxiels (whichever looks best). Then erase over the Focal and use the Sharpen tool (not the filter) on only the bits that look too blurry. I've noticed that the dots are too sharp again so try this and see if it helps at all =)
the second version is a BIG improvement Nice work on the text and good job on losing the sparkles above the face Although, if you look closely, you can still see some near the chin and on the lighted part of her face (guessing it's a she )
