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LoL, you don't even notice the black bored on the sides.....oh welll >_<

 

It would look better without the text.

 

definitely v2 imo. yea text could be toned down a little, its too close to the piece, and for this piece it kind of gets distracting.

 

the text seems to be the focal of this because i dont really see anything else here. still pretty good to me

 

the text seems to take away all of the attention :/
tbh i think the sig would look too empty without it though.
Don't really know how you could solve it :'(

 

Thanks for all the cNc guys, I appreciate the feedback

 

I like the text however. Though it could be a bit smaller.

The second version is much better as well.

I like how the edges are blurred and look smooth over the sharpened edges.