I like it, it looks pretty nice. Only thing that bothers me is the transitioning of the text. Try aligning the text up.
yea i definitely like the concept, and the text didnt bother me until anything-pink mentioned it and now my eyes focus right to it. haha other than that great job.
nice concept can I ask what render you used for the second part (the venetian mask?) I've been trying some renders for it but had little luck so far:S