Definitely dont like whatever that is over his face. And there is absolutely nothing going on on the left side.
its pretty good. didnt like the pattern to the right and the left side is pretty empty, but still looks good. gjgjgj
What do you mean there is nothing over his face? What is that on his mouth to his forearm? It looks like hes a demon spraying something out of his mouth.
V2 is best Negative space doesn't work for this tag.. Not liking the scanlines all that well.. You don't have that much color and effects in the tag, and the one blue part that you do have is covered by scanlines. So just delete some off that part, just so you still have the scanlines in the tag, just not so overwhelming. Text could would well for the negative space as well, so I wouldn't mind seeing a version with text
It's a vast improvement from what you first showed me. Hm, I still think the c4d on his shoulder is a bit right.