lighting could be better, dont centre your focal, try improving the tags composition by adding and experimenting, fix the depth and yeah
ok spambotz, could you go more in depth in your criticism though please, because it may help. What exactly is wrong with the lighting and depth, and what would you add to improve the composition.. and as for the focal being in the centre it isn't normally where i would place it, but i did like the way it looked here.
haha yeah, i had a lot of trouble with text.. just couldn't find a good way to fit it in there and look nice. I threw my name in above his shoulder on the right, but it was really only in there cause it had to be, so it's kind of hidden haha. I'll try to improve the text, but thanks a lot for your comment wolfgang.
i like the affect actually cause is makes it look like hes a statue against an old greek wall. texk could be better, but like you said you are undecided. gj imo.
Its ok. But just to add that the text for the SoTW has to be readable. They don't want to have to strain to see the text, and that is definitely straining me! Just tryin to help a brotha out.
thanks man, i didn't think it was to hard to read.. but just hard to notice. But i will definitely try to do something with it.
I'm just gonna bump it once, only because i still think there is more i can do with this.. thanks for all your comments, and your criticism so far.. and if theres no more, thanks again haha.
