I agree, needs a hella lot more detail. I would try to make something that you created like a design or something besides just copying over something, unless you can make it look like Virt did his then I say go for it, but I don't think you will be able to. Vector people/images are just over-done, don't know if you know of artmonkey or zombie at PR but they do some bad ass vectors of stuff I don't see people normally do..
I will make something probably this weekend for this, busy as of right now. Why the hell we don't have at least one entry for this, meh?
FOG asked me to post this for round 2 in the battle. He sent draven a pm for permission for the forum but draven has not assigned his user group yet. Link- http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs35/f/2008/237/4/b/4b8fbf4bad5360ce9114123d11308753.jpg