Bottom is way too bright,and the colors are not too appealing to me. Effects look over-sharpened as well
yeah i tried to make it alot less bright at the bottom but it didnt work lol here is another one cause im to lazy to make a topic =\
It is better but I would crop some off of the bottom because it looks really messy down there. Lighting looks a little to 'soft white brushed' if you know what I mean. But I like it more than the first one that you posted.
Yeah, I can see what you were going for but I don't think you nailed it, just keep practicing. Also the colors aren't very good imo.
