Newbie Wants Some Critique

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by falcon punch, Aug 18, 2008.

  1. falcon punch

    falcon punch Well-Known Member

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    Critique please, thanks in advance :D
     
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    did u make these c4d urself?
    1st one looks great IMO, 2-4 look pretty bland, no effects.
    the last one doesn't have a good focal.

    you should check out some tuts.
     
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    Tuts? Bah. No thanks

    I make all the C4D's I used in the abstracts yes.
     
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    what the ------ are you on?
    great stuff man, really great stuff.
     
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    Nice I like the first one but the last one no.
     
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    i see u got a great view for flow..
    very nice stuff man.. ;)
     
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    Tuts for this guy? You should read tuts yourself. The tag in your sig space doesn't and can't even compare to his level.

    These are f*king sweet man. I love the abstract pieces and the way they flow. Not sure about the Daredevil one though.
     
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    I'm a bit iffy on this.

    On the one hand, number 1 is relatively amazing.
    However, all the others are boring with no proper focal.

    Hm.
     
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    1st looks awesome man, all the others look good too but feel a bit unfinished, they could use some work. gj anyway man ^_^

    :huh: yea.... right
     
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    the first 1 is tight the nicest ive seen for a long time good work :)
     
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    got some great work here
     
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    I agree with the above 8 posts.


    Number two looks creepy as hell though.
     
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    the first one is amazing bro
     
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    1st is awesome. Tuts are good for everyone, they help you learn new techniques that you may have never thought of. I would practice more on working renders into your abstract work, could be really awesome if you pull it off with the proper execution.

    They are all pretty bad ass but I think they get worse as you go down. Just my personal opinion. 1 and 2 are my favs, I find that my eyes wonder around alot on 3 and 4 and I feel perhaps they would make better large pieces?
     
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    Yeah, the purple glowing one and the orange one below it were some of my early abstract sigs as I was getting into C4D. Thanks everyone :D


    As for the daredevil one, so far from the different sites that I have posted on I have gotten some mixed opinions on it, some people on NSL like it quite a bit. I have some slightly older sigs to put up here in a little bit, as right now I am focusing more on C4D.

    Also on the fourth one, I originally composed it as a vert but some people didn't like it as such.

    Thanks again though :D
     

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