New Siggie

very nice i love the depth past the focus
only bit that bugs me is top right just dont look right

9/10

 

Thanks :]

Hmm the top right was supposed to be some light shining in form the side to support the blur and have some more depth.
I guess it didnt work out o-o;

 

It's a 8/10 for me the right side is kinda bad and the
c4d is blocking the border.

 

I did that on purpose <_<
To create a cool effect >_>

 

its cool that light is there just the lighting you used didnt work for me.

Dont get me wrong its ace work just personal preferance im only new to teh game myself so just ignore meKeep up the good work

 

Interesting. Text isn't that good. Can't even read it. I suggest removing it. The left side is just perfect. The right side seems a bit weird. The C4D looks out of place. Also the lighting is awkward. I think you should remove the sword in the background. It messes with the effect in the foreground. Just fix the right side and it'll be tight.

 

Hm the sword in the background was supposed to be a blur factor but i guess it's distracting =/

I lold at the text, yea i have this big text weakness and i really thought about removing it but i dunno kept it for strange odd reasons.

Ima try to fix the right side x] (i guess the c4d over the border didnt kick it as much as i hoped x[ )

EDIT:

 

YES! That looks so much better than the last one. Maybe if you were to work on a more "natural" looking lighting then it'll be hawt.