meh pr3d too much goin on takes away from a focal point its like a blob....if you get what im sayin......
agreed and the smudge coming off his face mask thing isnt working that well and maybe lower the opacity on some c4ds and splatter brushes or something
I would recommend adding a little more depth to it. Yeah, and the smudging over the MC face mask isn't working. You might consider adding some gradient maps also, right now, its just a little monotone. Maybe raising the contrast a little will fix that also. Something I like to do sometimes is create a new layer, apply the image and set it to overlay, then just set the opacity to something you like. For a first sig though, its nice work. Hope I helped in some way...