Ironman

Not too bad. Text could use a bit of work as could the depth.

 

thanks =)

 

Agreed, text and depth work. You've improved quite a lot. Keep it up.

 

Thanks again =)

 

Text could be better, but I think the C4D throws off the flow of it. Great colors, decent compo.

 

Those purple lines to the left of him are out of place and the text could be tweaked.

Aside from that, it's awesome.

 

the c4d could be better but then you guys would be complaining it looks boring or unfinished

 

Text needs Work
Work on compo and flow