Master Flame

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by 4v `Burning Phoenix, Aug 14, 2008.

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    Render (95% of the sig is all made from this, copyright JWJ via GameRenders): http://dl.getdropbox.com/u/24627/goldenaxe_jwj_1.1.png

    I worked especially hard and long on this, so I would like some CnC. I'm asking for both comments and criticisms, because I'm sick of people telling me only the flaws and not what's good too (I love to know the flaws, but it helps if you point out what I did right too :D).


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  2. -S&#1103;.WolfganG

    -S&#1103;.WolfganG Well-Known Member

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    the last two is pretty good.. nice fx.. would love to see it texted
     
  3. Transluc3nt

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    So the colors and effects are good.

    Overall though it looks flat. You can tell that you copied the dragon's face a couple times to create the background. I think with better blending and composition it would have worked well.

    The blur on the right side of version one seems odd. The light source seems kind of fake. I think you could have darked the lower corners to improve the lighting a bit.

    Version 3 has the best depth, but could use just a little more contrast. I think if you were to pick one thing to improve it would be the blending of the girl, and the lighting.

    I think you've got a good concept and a good start. But it definitely seems like a WIP. I'd love to see a version 4 with some improvements :)
     

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