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yo

i need to add text to this but will probably make it look really bad.


any tips for text?

 

I think the render placement could be better. A little more to the right. The line is kind of random, the background is a bit blurred so you could add some foreground effects to create some depth. Add a bit more color to it maybe... kind of monotone as it is.

Text could be simple and placed just above the guitar.

 

thanks for the comments, meant to remove the line (oops), think i will leave the position on this and work the foreground. Can always start over coz its the only way to learn.

 

i would get a nice text and make it go slanted so it gose up against the gutiar in a yellow goldish color. or on the orange line

 

the text needs alot more depth. but the work is vfery original

 

hey thanks


C&C taken on board, think ill amend this and see the outcome and also re create with a bigger more central focal. i will put up the results

 

new take