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  1. Robin

    Robin Well-Known Member

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    <div align="center">don't know what i have to do with the text.. everything i try looks like crap... i might change the color bit too.

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    plz tell me what you think..
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    Looks great. Maybe a little stronger lighting on the backround to match the foreground lighting, but that's about it.
     
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    Overtopazed. And it just has a weird size..

    Not sure about this one. The edges just throw me off a lot.
     
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    Doesn't look over-tapazed to me. The colors are amazing on the first one. I feel like you should make the girl stand out just a bit more though.
     
  5. Robin

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    ok, thanks guys. and i might tweak the canvas size a bit neuron, i see what you mean.
     
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    I love the colors and flow of it. Only thing I don't like is that her elbow gets cut off. It's like the leading competitor of Juicey Juice: It's missing %10..
     
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    I like it, colors are nice and it has a nice smooth feel to it. As stated above make your focal stand out more though. Could also use a little water textures.
     
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    add more of that green in bg to light it up and improve focal >=)
     
  9. Robin

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    ok, thanks guys, i'll see if i can improve some things when i have the time
     
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    nice tag robin. Its been a long time since ive seen any of your work.
     
  11. Robin

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    thanks man, glad too see you again here on GR ^_^
     
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    idunno robin, not really your usual level to be honest
    lighting seems too strong, colors are meh
    topaz seems to be used a lot
    idunoo it's not a bad sig, but just not as good as some of your other stuff
     
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    i like alot! very sick man your rad
     

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