tbh, I done like it, you can do better. the resean for this is because the colors are too random, the blur/ sharpen is all over the place, and its messing up the flow. And text could use some work. Sorry if I sounded harsh
Hmm okay I see, well I only sharpened the focal, I'll try removing the blurring though and make the colors blend more. Nah it wasn't harsh at all