Fear

I am going to try a new style. So how's it look?

 

The concept is nice. But it's a little too sharp and doesn't flow quite in the same direction..

 

I wasn't trying to go with flow, I was trying to make my own concept, It's like a mind a million things going on at one time in one small area, but yet there is still one main focus on that mind.

 

That's pretty sexy. I like the colors and effects. The lighting is pretty odd though. I'd make the text a different color to make it blend with the effects better.