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This is what came out.



Tips and rates would be much appreciated ;;

Thanks in advance. ^_^

 

Looks pretty good, although it lacks flow imo. Nice effects and whatnot. I'd suggest changing the color of the text to a more orangeish-red, something that would fit better.

 

get rid off the orange effects in front of her and then increase the contrast on lighting on her back and throughout the tag 'just the lighting'

 

i like the deapth to this one