First Manip

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  1. Aug 2, 2008 at 9:53 AM #1
    Nox919

    Nox919 New Member

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    [​IMG] Before

    [​IMG] After

    Please CnC. It's my first one, that's why I need many comments to improve it.
     
  2. Aug 2, 2008 at 9:58 AM #2
    G.S.Design

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    the cracks dont go well on the left side
    right side is ok man
     
  3. Aug 2, 2008 at 9:59 AM #3
    Nox919

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    Thanks for the fast comment! I'll try to fix that.
     
  4. Aug 2, 2008 at 10:18 AM #4
    Sil3nt_4ss4ssin

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    I agree about the cracks. The right side is pretty well done. It blends in nicely, the lighting fits in perfectly. Nice job.
     
  5. Aug 3, 2008 at 11:38 PM #5
    Neuron

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    The cracks aren't flowing with the shape of the terrain. Meaning they are a flat texture on a surface that is bumps and ridges.

    You could also do more if this is a manip.

    Did you create the original?
     
  6. Aug 5, 2008 at 5:26 AM #6
    YashBhatt

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    nice man
     

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