Venom

Rate and CnC Please



krank

 

personally I like it
maybe just add a txt and make the canvas smaller? the focal is kinda small....
(yeah I know sprites are small but u can take advantage if u make a smaller canvas )

 

There is som text ;P

 

I don't see the text either...

Nice flow and colors. Lighting is decent but the depth could be improved.

 

wow... i didnt know there was text till read down further in the post.... i dont think that was a good choice of colour for the text im afraid lol

i see where the text is if i get reallllllly close to my monitor lol


but um anyway


i like it overall, but the text needs fixing..... perhaps blend the sprite in.... or bring out the colour a little in the bg

 

`The text was meant to be really discreet since it's not my strong point xD

 

txt is too dark, can hardly see it.

 

Hmm, you got some flow, but i don't think the tag's catchy enough... It has hardly anything attracting to it, the sprite is very small and well, imo it's just too empty... Sorry m8

 

man just saw the txt after putting my eyes at 1cm over the monitor
how about adding a clipping mask text? that sometimes does the trick

 

All fair comments, i'll take all this into account next time, but this was my first sprite sig and it appears i didn't choose a very good sprite >.<

 

lol was I the only one that saw the text immediatly?
i actually like it, especially for a first one, but it's lacking some foreground effects, and well... some more fx overall.
looks good tho