Hmm.. Yes it does seem unfinished :huh: .. Though I'm not sure what exactly to tell you what to add with it since I have a completely different style. I would add some effect C4Ds though. Round bubble kinds, or possible do a little Displacing with a Sparks layer
the colored one looks better, but a bit too bright imo.. besides that the fx is nicely done, and text needs work
agreed. more colors for the colord one, less splat clipping masks. text isnt good. btw just a lil advice, i prefer not to keep ur focal in the middle of the tag, if u do, then wen the effects r in, theres not much flow in the pece and the tag looks hella dull. the effects are evend out, try not to do tht, maybe 1 side more fx, and then the other side is calmed down or something.
