He's blurry, and the bg area close to him is a little too sharp but the depth created to the right is great with a few adjustments it will be nice gj
I like version 2. Its very well done. The depth is good, the text is decent, and the overall feel to me is very good.
Nice Lighting. White text ruins the composition, and the feel of the tag. He isn't the focus atm. The rock is more the focus because its stronger and sharper, and he's too blurry.