2nd Lp (i Whs Bored Lol)

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  1. Jul 28, 2008 at 4:24 PM #1
    ThE DaRkSiD3

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    I had a hard time modeling tht heart lool xD
    made it with the free transform tool on cinema 4d its the 1st thing i ever modeled in cinema 4d xD

    c&c please!
     
  2. Jul 29, 2008 at 7:58 AM #2
    YashBhatt

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    Don't like it much
    Your Gf's Pic stands out a bit from the rest
     
  3. Jul 29, 2008 at 3:07 PM #3
    ThE DaRkSiD3

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    hmm k xD thnx for the tip i'll try to change it later :D :D
     
  4. Jul 29, 2008 at 5:06 PM #4
    ThE DaRkSiD3

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    i changed the image i gave it a bit more depth and the focal takes less attention now...
     
  5. Jul 30, 2008 at 1:32 PM #5
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    Considering it is your girlfriend I'm sure you would want her to look very attractive.
    Right now, she isn't looking too good because of the effects you used on the image.

    The heart is the best thing in the piece. Although the shape of the heart is off.

    You should change the colour of the type to white. Red on red = bad.

    Because you got cinema 4d renders everywhere doesn't make the piece look attractive.
    You should emphasize more on the beauty of your girlfriend (Girls like to see themselves look good)
    and the fact you love her(?).

    The picture itself isn't good too. I would use the picture that is in your signature instead.

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  6. Jul 30, 2008 at 4:36 PM #6
    the-brightsid3

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    nice for the first time in cinema 4d:D
     
  7. Jul 30, 2008 at 4:56 PM #7
    ThE DaRkSiD3

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    hmm ur right on tht one lol xD i tried to blend her in with the pic way to much xD lol i could change the colors i didn't have her look this way be4 i havent blended her in be4 just put on some effects xD which made her standout allot more but i dunno i might change the colors on her face and might take away some effects on her, thnx for the comment and advice dude i'll def use it some good advice :D :D
     

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