To F A I T H 09

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Rusty but yeah.</div>

 

lovely tag
the c4d in the background
is really distracting maybe
Change it to one which has
like red or orange colours
only and not like random
Green everywhere.
the green on the c4d is very
disgracting

 

Looks nice. And for being rusty it looks good.

 

...learn how to use the lines..not "Enter" after every 4 words. It is annoying and takes time to read :mellow:

Looking good Verb For being Rusty...btw take a bath in some alcohol or some mercury..that should help to get the rust out!

Btw you forgot me :wub:

Zain

 

how did i forget you mate?

Also, i dont see to much green

 

Left side has a strong focus, maybe dim it down a little bit?

Nice work!

 

left side feels empty

 

if you knew my work, you'd know i make alot of use of negative space. You can totaly see what the focal is, there.

 

WICKED

 

Thanks : D