I like the idea but I think it could have been a little better if his face stood out a little more. It seems that the (actual) left side of his face is kind of being "dragged" downward, and his one eye being dark kind of adds to that. I don't know if you know what I mean or not, it might just be the render and not something you did. It's good though.
He hits his downfall later in the movie. I was going for something to represent that, hence, the dragging face. Great eye mate.