Ironman

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Mistikal, Jul 21, 2008.

  1. Jul 21, 2008 at 1:38 PM #1
    Mistikal

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    Really pleased how this one came out, hope you like it.

    cnc please :)

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    ver 2

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  2. Jul 21, 2008 at 3:28 PM #2
    Transluc3nt

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    Good use of C4D's, but you should sharpen up the focal a little bit. Increase the depth.
     
  3. Jul 21, 2008 at 4:22 PM #3
    MindlessV

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    Pretty nice :) Extremely bright howerver :P Tone it down a bit xD
     
  4. Jul 21, 2008 at 5:03 PM #4
    Mistikal

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    Thanks for the comments and advice guys :)
     
  5. Jul 21, 2008 at 5:05 PM #5
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    Pretty much what I was thinking, the fact that its so bright kinda takes away some of the depth and makes it less pleasing to the eye.
    Sharpen up the focal point and darken it a bit.
     
  6. Jul 21, 2008 at 7:30 PM #6
    Mistikal

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    Thanks for the input guys, made a few alterations...

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