Dream

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by smartgfx, Jul 20, 2008.

  1. smartgfx

    smartgfx Active Member

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    anywhos cnc this please

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    either way I am gonna psot a tut for this, but depending on the responces I get I may release it free instead of a paid tut
     
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    [-Wizard-] Senior Member

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    Seems like you just stuck the render there, because it doesn't seem blended very well. It's okay I guess, but the whole thing seems kind of random. I'm not sure if releasing a paid tutorial is the best option.
     
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    it is called dreams cos it is a very surreal piece, but yeah, it aint my best
     
  4. G h o s t f a c e.

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    The composition isn't that well, like wizard said, it look's like you just placed a render on top of a stock and smudged a bit.
    The effect's could use some work, all i basicly see is some smudging and maybe a bubble C4D.
    The depth could be alot better, it look's like your focal is just laying flat against the canvas.
    The text is bad as well, i suggest trying to stay away from text until your absolutely sure that you can use it without ruining your work.
     
  5. Transluc3nt

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    Kind of looks like a floating head. Try to blend a little better. I like the theme and the colors though.
     

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