My First Post And First Render

MY FIRST POST AND FIRST RENDER

i admit it has not come to that standarD,but its a start.

pls give suggestions to improve.

original

http://i37.tinypic.com/33cotu9.jpg


render



bye & TC

 

for a first render pretty good.. the wings are a little choppy but its a good effort

 

thanks for ur encouragement , i will try to make better one next time. :lol:

thanks!!! <_<

 

um wow? zoom in really close and you can get alot beter of a cut

 

Yes, good render for a first but you must remember to zoom in really closely and if you are using the eraser, don't use that.

 

thanks for ur encouragement and tips


bye &tc

 

really chopy but good 4 a first ^_^

 

if this is your first cut, its a great job man

 

looks pretty good only i dont think u used the polygon...i think u used the eraser tool...u should look up some tuts and use the polygon tool

 

good for a start.. but the eraser is not the best tool to use when rendering
do this, take the Pen Tool and zoom in around 700-800x and start tracing around the render

 

Learn to use the pentool mate,

 

It's alright for your first.

 

Nice for first!
Check out some rendering tutorials and keep at it m8

 

For a first it's pretty good. Extremely choppy, but still, it's your first. So good job and keep practicing.

 

Really Good For a Start Keep it Up