The text isn't too good, i suggest not using text until you know how to use it effectively and properly. I also suggest not centering your focal's. Tip: I suggest saving your work as .PNG file's, instead of .JPG files, for quality reasons.
I know how to use texts effectively, sometimes it's more effective just with simple text, that is how birdman did it with his tutorial, and he's really good
Trust me, it does. You have to first save it as a png, you cant save as a jpg then go back and resave it. Trust me, i know.