Typography?

I came up with this, not sure wheter it's considered typography or not.
also, other C&C is very appreciated:


molten metal style

That is on a white background (not sure about how it looks on the forum's bg

 

Typography is when the tag in general is text, this tag incooperates smudging, excluding it from the typography catagory.
The smudging look's bad in the background in my opinion.
The text is hard to establish.
Nice try though.

 

Nice style

 

thanks me style.
and I see, ghostface, thanks for the feedback

 

It's cool, but almost completely illegible.

 

that's what I was going for, even if it might not be liked much
thx