I had to look a long time before I actualy saw what it was. I like the idea but I don't feel the background, doesn't really fit with the rest.
don't like the stroke, i'd like to see a version without it. apart from that, very nice job. maybe the effects go just a bit too much over his face on the right, but maybe it's just me.
The text is bad, i suggest staying away from text until you learn how to use it properly. The composition is also wierd, the focal doesn't go with the background.
