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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by l0l0l, Jul 19, 2008.

  1. l0l0l

    l0l0l Senior Member

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    These are my two most recent signatures.

    C&C Please

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  2. G h o s t f a c e.

    G h o s t f a c e. Well-Known Member

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    I suggest reading some tutorials.
     
  3. Transluc3nt

    Transluc3nt Well-Known Member

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    That really doesn't help very much.

    First Sig:
    - Needs better depth, add some foreground effects. The other effects are all kind of blurry.
    - Lighting could be better, darken some parts up.

    Second Sig:
    - Has a cool concept, good colors.
    - There are effects that are sharper than the focal, try to bring the focal point out more.
    - Depth could be improved.
    - I'd remove the text.
     
  4. G h o s t f a c e.

    G h o s t f a c e. Well-Known Member

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    I am sorry for my false critism.
    Try cleaning up your effect's and making them more substancial with the focal's / tag itself.
    I also suggest not centering your focal's.
    I didnt think i needed to be -Repped for that though :(
     
  5. ArcticSteel

    ArcticSteel Well-Known Member

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    Both sigs could use a solid light source. The effects of the first one look pretty good. I would remove the second face on the last sig and replace it with something else, just doesn't feel right.
     
  6. l0l0l

    l0l0l Senior Member

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    Thanks for the great advice. I tried to do some stuff, how are these?

    -Made it smaller
    -Added a light source near top left
    -Fixed some blur
    -Darkend some parts
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    -Made it smaller
    -Took away the second face
    -Added a bit more effect
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  7. G h o s t f a c e.

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    They are much better then the first version's posted.
    ^_^
     

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