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Discussion in 'Large Artwork' started by _DiamondF.Baby_, Jul 19, 2008.

  1. First Large Piece i've done I want to know what you guys think. It's all stock, no downloaded brushes or other stuff like that.
    C&C please. Thanx :)

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    btw the pink dots and the bluish lines were generated by me in after effects, they're not c4d's or someone elses stuff
     
  2. G h o s t f a c e.

    G h o s t f a c e. Well-Known Member

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    I think it's a little ironic that this there isn't a diamond in this piece. ^_^
    I'm not liking the boring background.
    Good try though, nice for your first :)
     
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    wildsorrow Well-Known Member

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    I don't think the piece doesn't need a diamond itself, however, if it is called "diamond" I think it needs more sparkle to it.

    Diamonds are white, grey, black and maybe transparent. They are also a type of gem.

    I think you didn't execute this well because you didn't execute the context of a diamond.

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    i dont think theres enough effects for such a large canvas, and its a bit grainy, picture quality?
    overall nice piece, i like the perspective lines underneath the text.
     
  5. ok thanx ill try to improve, but diamond is just my gamerenders name thats why its there, the idea of the piece wasn't about having a diamond in there.
     
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    just blend mooe!
     

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